OMG. This is just amazing. And so cute! Squee! I love you so much right now. <3

But, um, concrit time, but only because you're just so damn awesome. Okay, um, I think you should change/darken the blues of Rath's bandana and over their eyes, because it's too close to that of the background. Also, it kind of looks like Wil is wearing a dress/skirt, so you might want to make the line of his shorts more definitive (which, by the way, is sort of crooked).

But besides all that, this is so awesome. Seriously. I cannot express how awesome this is!

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^-^ Thankies.
XD It looks like a skirt? Haha, maybe that was what I was going for. Subconsciously.
Yes, I know the lines aren't very good, but just pretend they're baggy.


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Well, maybe you should just erase the line all together then, so that way it really is a skirt!

Because Wil + skirts = awesome.

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XD Yes! The next FE pic will have skirt!Wil.

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Yay! skirt!Wil is pure awesome, I say. Rath agrees. ^-^

I hate to bug you about this again, but... please, for the love of all that is holy, darken the blues on their faces. Or at least make it black or something. It looks just like they have an empty space there if it's the same color as the background.

And, um, I think the short's outline looked better when it was orange/brown/tan/purple/whatever color it was before. The bright blue makes it too stand out-ish and noticable.

But, ah, that's just me. Um, sorry, this was a bit rude, wasn't it? Ah, I'm too blunt sometimes.

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tophets_tool: [blah blah incest/slash wank] From now on, could no-one refer to any pairing as 'heterosexual'? It's very insensitive to those of us who have to live with the burden of being straight.

Eee! This is lovely~! I haven't seen such lovely RathWil fanart in a looooong time. :33

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Thank you. I've checked out your gallery (I've been meaning to comment, just haven't gathered the nerve)- you have really nice art too ^^

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Haha, I need to scan and color the skirt!Wil soon, but I have to make sure Lucas won't show anyone. >>

It's alright. I really appreciate the good concrit! Alright, I'll go fix up the shadows and shorts! I agree about the brightness, but it was the first color I chose to make the shorts outlined more clearly. ^^

No, not at all. I'm glad you took the time to get a good look at the picture

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